"We're lost aren't we? Admit it!" The most annoying person in the world, my sister Zhi yi said. "No we're not" I replied, checking the map in my hand."We are at Tampinse Street 11. We are almost home." "Yeah, right. That sign would say different." I looked where she was pointing "Brooke Road" the sign said. My spirits plummeted. She was right, again. " I heard that there are a lot of gang fights in this area. " She said. Inwardly, I groaned. As if this day, or night could get any worse. Just as that thought formed in my mind, I saw 20 people dressed like gangsters across the street. If looks could kill, I would have dropped dead by now. One of them looked at me, smiled, and took out a chopper out of some hidden pocket........
Chopper... LOL! I think this may be a story whereby the sibling rivalry between the persona and her sister is explored. A bond of sibling love should develop as the story progresses. - Liang Hao
ReplyDeleteMy guess to what the story would end up is like the siblings gets into some trouble (OBVIOUSLY) and then the sister saves the brother and that changes the perception of the persona towards his sister. Helicopters don't fit in pockets. :)
ReplyDeletehmmm....a gang fight? And the siblings became closer in time of crisis?
ReplyDeletequote: " Only in time of crisis will a true leader rise and lead." around there....but well, probably get caught in the crossfire of a gang fight or that guy with the chopper is a serial killer? Or a psychopath who hacked everyone in his way?
Hi Wei Yang, I think that this story would progress to become a gory and gruesome gang fight. Perhaps the persona might defend his sister especially when she is younger than the persona. There is also a posibility of the story to become something like a chase by the gang members, which may be quite likely since there were twenty gang members and they wield knives. Either way, it would become an extremely exciting thriller.
ReplyDeletewell...the general direction of the story is pretty obvious, that there would be a fight and a lot of bonding and character development of the persona and his sister. Overall i think that tiet gan's guess was the closest, although he did not write about the development thing.
ReplyDeleteOh and the I meant to write chopping knife (i was in a hurry to finish this)=[